Jan 27 2011
Rebut-nik
Pre-Ramble: It’s been a couple of days since the State of the Union address … enough time for partaisan factions to hold court and the gestalt of the evening to soak in. Enough time to consider and confirm my initial reaction — “underwhelmed.”
I am generally a big fan of President Obama … a dip into the K. blog archives will more than ratify that. He is smart, strategic, plucky (in a good way), and a brilliant communicator. Obama has set a very high bar for himself. We’ve seen him deliver highly articulate, moving, even artful speeches on the campaign trail and on numerous occasions since he’s been in office. We KNOW he can clear that mark. This is what makes the other night’s performance so disappointing. The message, delivery and even his wardrobe, fell short.
Message – The concepts and words were all there … … characterization of the American legacy and people as “exceptional” … some Kumbaya around the bipartisan campfire … a carefully laid out (tedious laundry list) agenda … a couple pom-pom-worthy rallies around the old Sputnik watering hole … and a fist-pumping shout-out to ”Win the Future!!” On paper, all of this stuff probably looked really good.
- Bring it! Sorry, but the “Win the Future” tagline is lame and inflammatory. Messaging around the concept of “winning” sets up the very type of contentious binary contest that I thought we were trying to extinguish – both in our polarizing political rhetoric and on the volatile international stage. Instead of courting supremacy by striving to “win the future,” how about if we ”Lead the Future” instead?
- “Exceptional” … this part was exceptionally good. I’d rather be part of Team Exceptional, a generous and gracious effort moving boldly forward into a prosperous future, than engaged in some contrived cage match where one group “wins” and the others are all losers. This isn’t Gladiator.
- Z-Z-Z-z-z-z … Sputnik was the wake-up call for 53 years ago. All that talk about the need to step-up expectations around math and science education … to grow innovation to be competitive in the global marketplace — we’ve been reciting those lines while punching the snooze button for 30 years. It’s time to jettison that tired, toothless battle cry and DO-SOMETHING-nik.
Delivery – Maybe it was an off-day, … maybe the planets weren’t lined up quite right … but I just didn’t feel the energy and conviction behind the words that I’ve come to expect. You’d think Barack could work up a little more spark and fervor around the inherently peppy concepts of creativity and innovation. Even Speaker Boehner’s golden-toasty laser-focused silence projected more umpf.
NOTE: several folks appeared to be dozing off … their eyes closed … heads down. Actually, these diligent sorts were reading along in their programs as the President spoke his speech aloud. One gal, however, (the woman in the burgundy suit with her head flopped to the side … you know who you are) was clearly NOT reading along. … If you can’t stay awake for an hour-and-a-half to listen to the Leader of the Free World talk about the state of life as we know it, give me your seat and go take your fricking nap out in the hall.
Wardrobe - Ok, the State of the Union isn’t a fashion show, but what was up with that fade-me-into-the-background, monochromatic blue/grayness that the Commander-in-Chief had going on up at the podium? I’m not advocating anything neon, or even flag-y, … But B-Dog — you’re a young, hip, naturally stylish guy, … and you’re THE PRESIDENT. We know you’ve got other stuff in your closet — give us something!?
The Take-Away: Except for the part where he was urging young people to become the kind of steady and inspiring teacher-leaders we need in the 21st Century classroom, the President’s 2011 State of the Union speech reluctantly gets a B-.
We know you can do better, young man. See me after class and we’ll talk about some things you can do to earn extra credit … (we’ll start with the military budget … )
Post-Note: Notice how everything sounds a little edgier with “nik” tacked onto the end of it-nik?







